Following is a post from my business website, Business Writing Coach …
Picture it. Your employee, John, has just drafted a document to an external audience, a government department who funds you, for example, or a first-time client, or twentieth-time client.
You read the document and your heart sinks. It’s just not up to scratch. It needs major rework yet the document has to go out tomorrow. What to do?
Most people will be tempted to fix it themselves. “We’re on a deadline,” you tell yourself, “I don’t have time to explain it to John.”
If you look closely, you may see another thought which goes something like this: “I don’t know how to explain it to John.” And maybe another: “If I say something, I’ll hurt his feelings and he’ll get defensive and then it’ll be difficult to work with him.”
Being unable to explain to another why a document doesn’t work, and what to do about it, is a common problem in business and it’s hardly talked about.
In our coaching sessions, we teach managers a set of distinctions that transforms this situation. The first and most important distinction is called Coaching from the distinctions.
Coaching from the distinctions
When coaching employees about their writing, do so from the distinctions.*
Remind the employee of the distinction (or explain it again or have them explain it), and then ask them to apply it to their work. Another way to say this is: explain the distinction, not the problem.
Doing this has the distinctions request the corrections, not you, and allows you to play the role of coach rather than judge and jury. It moves the relationship from one of superior knowledge vs inferior knowledge to one of partnership.
It allows the employee to be responsible for their writing and the source of their own correction. It also allows you to target specific issues rather than trying to fix everything at once.
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* To distinguish something means to bring it from the background to the foreground. A business writing distinction is a tool that allows a person to see what he or she is doing when writing.